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VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
and exactly 45 percent on Friday and Saturday respectively. Then it significantly 
decrease
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to marginally below 35 percent. 
(209 words)
Score: 8.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Covers all requirements of the task sufficiently. Presents, highlights and illustrates 
key features points clearly and appropriately.
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately.
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings.
Skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in 
word choice and collocation. Produces rare errors in spelling and word formation. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a wide range of structures. The majority of sentences are error-free. Makes 
only very occasional errors or inappropriacies. 
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---------- Question 2 ---------- 
You should spend about 
20
minutes on this task. 
The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain 
according to sex and age. 
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 
You should write at least