Ielts sample essays collection

 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. Has 
good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors. 

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
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You should spend about 
20
minutes on this task. 
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the 
Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same 
questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. 
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 
comparisons where relevant. 
You should write at least 
150
words. 
Example 1
From the pie-charts it is possible to get an idea of the feedback given by people who 
visited the Parkway Hotel 
between the 
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rs 
2005 and 2010, regarding their 
customer service. From
the
year 2005 to 2010 the percentage
of people who 
appreciated the hotel’s customer care performance increased drastically 
from
a value 
o
f
5% to 28%. At a similar rate, it is reported the “good” rating also increased by 25% 
between the two time periods. Following an opposite direction there are the “Poor” 
“Satisfactory” and “very poor” feedback left, which all decreased from year 2005 to 
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