Ielts sample essays collection

(LR) Lexical Resource
 
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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
Uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task. Attempts to use less common 
vocabulary but with some inaccuracy. Makes some errors in spelling and or word 
formation, but they do not impede communication. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. Makes some errors in grammar 
and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication. 
Example 3
The pie charts compare the results of a survey which was conducted for a hundred 
visitors to the parkway hotel to show their opinion towards customer service of the 
hotel in 2005 and 2010.
Overall,
visitors became happier about the hotel’s service in 
2010
according to the results that were observed from the survey. 
As is given in the data of the charts,
the majority of the guests showed their 
satisfaction
about the customer service with 45% and took first place in 2005.
However,
this situation changed in 2010 
because 
this percentage decreased to 17% 
and took third position.
While only 5% of the visitors said that the hotel service was 
excellent in 2005,
28% of the visitors were very satisfied in 2010.
Furthermore,
the 
percentage of the visitors who expressed their opinion about the hotel service and 
said good was 14% in 2005.
Nevertheless,
this percentage grew significantly and 
reached to 39%.
Twenty percent of the visitors were unhappy about the services in 
2005.
Interestingly,
this percentage dropped to 12% in 2010.
Finally,
there was a 
remarkable decrease in the percentage of guests who found that the customer 
service was poor
with
15% to 4% in 2005 and 2010 respectively.