Ielts sample essays collection

IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
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2010. From the data it is also possible to see that 
the 
percentages of visitors that 
considered the hotel’s customer service an excellent one is pretty much the same 
quantity that gave the worst rating in 2010
at about 5%
From the results of the 
questionnaire it is noticeable that the majority of guests answered with a 
“Satisfactory” rating, a
t
45% in 2005, while in 2010 the hotel’s customer service is 
mostly rated “Good”, with a 39% value. 
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Score: 6.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Candidate addresses the requirements of the task and presents an overview with 
information appropriately selected. There may be inconsistencies in tone. Candidate 
presents and adequately highlights key features/bullet points but details may be 
slightly irrelevant, inappropriate or irrelevant. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Candidate arranges information and ideas coherently, and there is a clear overall 
progression. Uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and between 
sentences may be faulty or mechanical. May not always use referencing clearly or 
appropriately when beginning paragraphs. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task. Attempts to use less common 
vocabulary but with some inaccuracy. Makes some errors in spelling and or word 
formation, but they do not impede communication. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. Makes some errors in grammar 
and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication.
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