The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

 

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Vocabulary 7-9 bands 
 
Celebrities/ well-known persons/ famous stars/
Help/ assistance / aid / contribution
Global philanthropic organization / global charitable organizations
global aid organization / international aid agencies /
global aid corporations
Counterproductive / inefficacious / ineffectual
downplay / understate / underplay / undervaluing 
pressing problems / 
bad deeds / denounced / jeopardize / trivialize / admired 
Prominent / goodwill ambassador / admirers
notorious / notoriety / hitches
 
 
 
 

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Some developing countries invite large foreign companies to open offices and factories in order 
to help their economy. However, others feel that foreign companies should be shut out and 
instead the government should help the local companies to contribute to the economic growth. 
Do you agree or disagree? 
As international firms are expanding their business all around the globe which is favored by one 
section of the society , meanwhile critics believe that assisting local firms is much fruitful step by 
government for uplifting the economic state of the nation . I however believe that overseas 
companies play more vital role in the development of the country. 
Following reasons justify my notion regarding the invitation to large companies. First and foremost, 
multinational companies provide vast job opportunities to the natives of any nation as they require 
more workforce for their functioning and also the packages which they offer to the employees are 
higher as compared to the local companies. Secondly, they have more sophisticated techniques 
which not only gives the opportunity to improve the quality for the labour but also provide them 
chance to learn about the state-of-the-art technology.
Moreover, due to international marketing and tie ups they have got access of taking various kinds 
of help from any of the first world countries and will be able to utilize the available resources to 
accomplish their staple needs. For instance, the growth of nestle is mainly due to the fact that they 
are able to produce dairy products on a large scale with the availability of massive milk supply. 
Furthermore, thanks to the overseas companies which results in local rivals becoming more 
competitive and innovative as they try to achieve the same level at which these international firms 
are operating by virtue of which they can learn so many new techniques which they are not using 
previously and this in turn proves to be so much beneficial for the customers. Last but not the least, 
this step of government also helps to raise the standard of people because with this they can attach 
themselves to the ultra-modern technology and all the latest techniques which they can apply in 
their daily lives to boost up the way of living. 
In conclusion, I reiterate my view that it becomes the need of the hour to invite foreign brands to 
establish their businesses for the effective and quick development of any nation.