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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
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(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. 
Makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce 
communication. 
 
Example 3
The table illustrates the total sales from October the 7
th
to the 13
th
at a small 
restaurant in a downtown business district. It reflects the sales for lunch and dinner 
throughout the week. 
Firstly
,
from the table, it is evident that during lunch time, the restaurant earned the 
most on Wednesday and Friday. The sales for these two days were $2,595 and 
$2,500 respectively. The lowest earning for lunch was on Sunday with only $1,550, 
just $400 difference compared to the total sales on Saturday. On Monday, Tuesday 
and Thursday, the earning
s
were similar, ranging between $2,300 to $2,500. 
Secondly, looking at the table for sales during dinner time, it clearly shows that on a 
Friday night, the revenue was the highest among other days, hitting more than 
$4000. Although
,
it is worth taking note that on a Tuesday night the total sales
amount
was $3850, just $500 lower than Friday. Ironically, the lowest earning for 
lunch and dinner time were both on Sunday, hitting $1550 and $2450 respectively. 
Overall, the total sales for dinner 
are
much higher than the total sales for lunch 
especially on Friday, as the total sales for dinner 
are
almost twice the amount for 
lunch. 
(204 words) 
Score: 7.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
All the key points are included with an overview. Some possible reasoning for the