Ielts sample essays collection

(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
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Covers the requirements of the task and presents a clear overview of main trends, 
differences or stages. Clearly presents and highlights key features but could be more 
fully extended 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. The 
candidate uses some less common lexical items with some awareness of style and 
collocation. There may be some occasional errors in word choice or spelling. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. 
Candidate has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors. 
 

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---------- Question 4 ---------- 
You should spend about 
20
minutes on this task. 
The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business 
district. 
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 
make comparisons where relevant. 
You should write at least 
150
words. 
 
Example 1
In the schedule we can see the sales of the restaurant for every day of the week 
during lunch and dinner time. The first thing that is clearly seen is the fact that all 
sales are lower during the weekend in comparison with weekdays.
The best sales for the lunch are seen during the week on Wednesday and Friday
Whereas for dinner the highest sales take place on Tuesday and Friday
. On Friday 
the restaurant generates the highest combined sales during an entire week. 
If we compare all dinner and lunch sales then it is obvious that a dinner provides a 
higher amount of sales compared to a lunch. The difference in sales between dinner 
and lunch is the biggest on a Friday. 
Only during lunchtime in the weekend, sales drop below 2000 dollars. All other sales 
fluctuate between 2375 and a maximum of 4350 dollars. 
We can conclude that overall sales are higher during the week and higher for dinner. 
Especially on Friday the combined sales are at its highest.