Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
The coastal vegetation experiments another phenomena but 
not
by human hand, the 
process is more 
of a 
natural cycle.
Nitrogen oxidation by lighting and nitrogen 
filtration by plants, which receive the nitrogen by rain.
The main characteri
s
tic is all 
the waste goes 
directly 
to the ocean. 
(144 words)

Score: 5.5 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Addresses all parts of the task; however, some parts are more fully covered than 
others. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Although this has some logical progression, there are no cohesive devices to guide 
the reader. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
There is adequate vocabulary for the task, although there are many errors which 
makes it difficult for the reader. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Unfortunately, there are a limited amount of structures and too many errors in 
grammar and punctuation. 
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