The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Vocabulary 7-9 bands 
 
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Lonely / isolated life / single occupants / living separately / solitary life 
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In recent times / in this contemporary
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Decision / opting to / choose to / prefer 
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Personally / professionally
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Sense of freedom / acute privacy 
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Flexibility / minimize distractions 
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Alienate with family / isolated / estranged
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Psychological issues / depression anxiety / resented / displeasure / 
anguished 
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Emotional and social support 
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Impatient / intolerant attitude 
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Addicted / narcotics / ruin life
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Not mature enough 
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Goal-oriented / ambitious
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Need of the hour 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Today people can work and live anywhere they want, because of the improvements in 
communicant technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh 
the disadvantages?
It is true that in this advanced era, it becomes possible for individuals to do job and stay in 
any sphere of the world due to advancements in telecommunication and automobile 
sector.
Although this trend in work culture has been criticized due to having some drawbacks , I 
strongly believe that it is far beneficial for workers as well as employers. 
On the one hand, there are some downsides of this technology .
Firstly, this modern
technology results in inclining sedentary lifestyle among masses which further becomes the reason 
of 
health issues like obesity , hyper tension etcetera .
Moreover , working at home also deter 
the people in developing certain skills like 
leadership qualities , team collaboration , problem 
solving abilities , as on work premises employees get chance to work collaboratively with 
their superiors and inferiors . 
Moreover, excessive dependence on technology also makes users 
handicapped in some situations like 
any failure in network may lead the life to standstill.
Finally, automobile industry has also intensified the consumption of natural resources and pollution 
level when whole the globe is suffering from the scarcity of these valuable sources. 
On the other hand, there are enormous benefits of this changing trend in work field.
First 
and foremost, it makes available diversified job choices for the individuals as they c
an work for 
any company around the globe which was not possible in earlier days. This kind of work 
culture also helps in 
r
educing the unemployment also as applicants are not confined to 
work in their own nation.
In addition, 
modern wireless technology has made life easy and 
comfortable with providing f
lexible working hours
and m
ultitasking as a result people 
nowadays are having much time to spend with their family members. Last but not least, 
this advanced technology has put some halt on brain drain and urbanization also as 
p
eople 
do not need to migrate to another cities or countries for job.
In conclusion, no doubt this cutting edge technology alienate the people from one another, 
I believe that it is proving a boon for the humanity.