The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

 
 
 
 

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Vocabulary 7-9 bands 
 
 
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Field / sector / process 
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Sophisticated machines / modern machines / computer based / 
technological
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Disastrous / ruinous / calamitous 
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Determining factor / competitive advantage 
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Penetration of technology / automation 
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Operational variability 
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Dangerous/ unsafe / hazardous/ menacing / impending 
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Radioactive / toxic 
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maintenance 
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Sedentary life / obesity 
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Prevalence / widespread 
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Density / skill / adroitness 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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As we are facing more and more problems, which affect the whole planet, good 
relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before 
. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that enormous issues are being faced by whole world that’s why some people 
believe that joint efforts at global level are crucial to solve these problems. I also assert 
that international cooperation becomes imperative in this unrested world. 
There are number of complications which can only be solved with international relations. 
The biggest issue is global warming which, I think can be dealt with the understanding and 
co-operation of academics from different nations. For instance, Kyoto protocol has been 
signed by 100 countries in which they pledged not to make industries which emit more 
than 5.2% carbon dioxide which has certainly proved to be pivotal in controlling the 
amount of CFC’s emitted into the atmosphere. Moreover, there are problems like 
terrorism, which are having a detrimental effect on our society. There are various global 
organizations, which are working towards eradicating these issues but it cannot be possible 
without trust and harmony between different nations. Furthermore, space exploration is 
another aspect which require exorbitant amount of money for its operations so bonding 
between countries is crucial if they want to get benefit on a large scale as these 
partnerships benefit all nations, even those outside the industrialized world to tackle 
workforce development issues and launch of new space activities. 
Another problem which the whole world is facing is the scarcity of natural resources that 
most of the nations are facing at present and some countries have abundance of these non 
renewable sources so international trade is important to balance the fuel prices on global 
scale. To add to it, it is also necessary to eradicate certain fatal diseases from the world for 
the welfare of humanity so first world countries should come forward to share their 
research and vaccines in order to help the unprivileged nations so that they can overcome 
such situations. Last but not least, the structure of economies of so many countries is 
generally volatile and no country can guarantee a solid economic stability so need to work 
hands on hands become imperative for the whole mankind to progress towards an un 
rested community. 
In conclusion, above mentioned ideas justify the importance of international relations to 
make this world a better living place.