The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

 

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Vocabulary 7-9 bands 
 
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Profession / field / educational field / educational sector / studies / studying
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Workaholic / studious/ toiler / workhorse / work oriented 
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Intense / strenuous / vigorous / difficult
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Genetics / abiding passion
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Unprecedented / prospective
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Positive trait / attitude / sincerity / honesty
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Bolster / productivity / motivated / obligation / industrious / committed
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Realm of education / diligently follow
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Role model / future prospects
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Unhealthy obsession / perfection / stifles creativity 
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Stressed / irritable / detrimental

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Some people think that children should go to play way school before they go to primary 
school, while others think it is better if they stay at home. Discuss both views and give 
your opinion. 
It is a debatable issue whether toddlers should start primary education directly or they 
should first attend kindergarten before taking their first step in the field of education. While 
some individuals think that it is a better decision to make kids stay with their families, I 
believe it is more advantageous to admit children in play way schools prior to primary 
education. 
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people support the idea of allowing children 
to stay at home during the early stage of life. 
Firstly, 
they think kids are too young and fragile 
to be exposed to outer world as they are not completely ready for a naive change and 
require lot of care and attention due to unawareness of their surroundings and on such 
occasion it becomes imperative if parents take care of their children. 
Secondly, it is a common 
saying tha
t parents are the best teachers at early age and staying together all the time is 
helpful for both parents and offspring’s to establish a strong bonding between them. Also, 
this healthy bonding is pivotal as this impression stays for entire lifetime of a child. 
Finally, 
f
acing competency at such an early stage sometimes has more negative aspects as they may 
get pressurized which constrains the growth and development of a child's future prospect.
On the other hand, I believe that making young ones attend kindergartens before primary school has 
enormous benefits.
First and foremost, play way schools act as foundational step for constructive 
growth of young children and even research has proved that they have high learning capability 
during formative years so procrastination is not recommended in education and they should start 
learning as soon as possible.
Moreover, by attending preschool classes, they could learn how to 
cooperate with peers in a group which may lead to growth of social personality. For instance, by 
playing a group game they would learn to help teammates and how to encourage them to do their 
best which can be totally adventitious for them to flourish in earlier stages.
Last but not least, if they 
join play way they will get familiarized and adaptive to school atmosphere at a very tender age by 
virtue of which they become acquainted with some basic subjects like alphabets and numbers which 
are essential requirements for primary school so children would go to nursery class with sufficient 
confidence. 
In conclusion, although some individuals advocate the benefits if kids stay with their families before 
starting education as this helps to create an inseparable bonding, I assert that going to kindergartens 
would be a pragmatic approach for them to become mentally strong youngsters.

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