Практикум по синхронному переводу с русского языка на английский

оказывают решающее влияние — here "impact" is a much better
choice than "influence."

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    нового сильного роста — "trend" works better than "growth," and
    "upwards" is stylistically more elegant than "strong," though that too is
    an option.
    

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    на ее долю приходилось от 70 до 90 — the interpreter's reflex
    reaction on hearing "приходилось" and a number should be "accounted
    for."
    

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    не последнюю роль — a good chance to use antonymic translation:
    "an important/major role."
    

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    от политики по пропаганде — the word "propaganda" is a highly
    loaded one in English. This is better rendered as "policy designed to
    promote" or "a campaign designed to promote," rather than as
    "propaganda," which has very negative connotations.
    

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    особенно выросла и стала одной из самых высоких в мире мужская
    смертность — if the interpreter does not have a text and therefore cannot
    know that the subject will be мужская смертность, he can begin with
    "There has been an increase" or "In particular, there has been an increase"
    which will open the way to a smooth sentence structure.
    

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    на высоком уровне продолжают оставаться — is another example of
    the same type of sentence. The interpreter who does not have the text can
    begin with "There is" or "There continues to be a high level..."
    

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