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…how to make our children good members of our society…
И второй момент – использование множественного числа существительных где только это возможно
…is difficult to find individual approaches…
…on the advantages of schools as social institutions to teach this.
А теперь уберите множественное число и подумайте, легко ли вам определиться с артиклем перед каждым существительным: a/an, the, ?
Итак, мой совет – множественное число и притяжательные местоимения.
Следующий абзац.
Test 2
Problems relating to new technologies in general have always been one of the topical issues of all over the world. How should we deal with them especially when it comes to relations that people make? How do they affect us? Are there more positive or rather negative effects in all that? Discussing these controversial questions it is impossible to give one well-defined answer for sure. (66)
Обратите внимание на замену this на these при переходе от единственного числа question к множественному числу questions – распространённая ошибка.
Переходим к написанию Абзаца 2 и Абзаца 3. Какие шаблонные фразы могу предложить?
On the one hand, it is obvious that…
It does not matter whether you like it or not you have to recognize the fact that…
Probably nobody would argue that…
I think each country should have a law regulating…
And some countries are carrying out the policy which aims at encouraging…
For example, some Asian countries have adopted this approach and the vast majority of people living there welcome it.
Presumably, this very attitude is one of the most sensible and results in an adequate way to resolve a lot of problems.
However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that…
Nobody can deny that it is impossible to replace…with…totally.
From my point of view it makes sense definitely.
But it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case.
Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define the matter in question.
Therefore it may remain for many a desirable ideal rather than an achievable reality.
This is the second point of view that I am in favour of, although I also realize how difficult it is to achieve sometimes.
И несколько идей для заключительного абзаца, если таковой вдруг напишется.
Абзац 4
It is impossible to estimate all the benefits and drawbacks of…
In any case, an attitude to this issue always depends on a particular person’s character and his or her personal circumstances or background.
But I firmly believe that individuals have no right to stand aside.
We should say whether we agree or disagree with what is going on in this area.
Итак, Test 1
On the one hand, it is obvious that parents are the ones who are always close to their children. And they can find individual approaches to them and share their own experience. It does not matter whether you like it or not you have to recognize the fact that we are like our relatives and likely to follow their way in becoming good or bad members of our society as well. So their experience, whether successful or not, may be of the prime value for us. (86)
However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that only schools are able to deliver all the information necessary to become true members of the society with long history. Ordinary people may lack knowledge and skills to teach anything even to their own children. Moreover, schools can be taken as models of the society which students are going to join in their adulthood. So these institutions may be considered the best for the job. (79)
From my point of view it makes sense definitely. In any case, an attitude to this issue always depends on a particular person’s character and his or her personal circumstances or background. (32)
Итак, Test 2
On the one hand, it is obvious that IT allows us to get in touch with each other more easily.
Probably nobody would argue that it is an advantage. We can make new fiends from quite a wide range of places even on the other continents. But what is more important for me, for example, I can daily contact my family living thousands kilometers away by Skype. From my point of view it makes sense definitely. It helps me stay aware of my family’s circumstances and brings me closer to my mum and dad. (95)
However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that it is not real communication. Nobody can deny that it is impossible to replace face-to-face conversations with virtual ones totally. Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define the matter in question. Going back to my point of ‘distant’ friends, are they real friends? People who you never see in person come to your life and sometimes may influence your decisions, for instance. I would stay quite cautious about that. But it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case. (101)
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