Ielts writing. Ielts: стратегия победы Ярослав Юмжаков ielts writing

I think it is impossible to estimate all the benefits and drawbacks of technology affecting our relations with different people.
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Итого, имеем, привожу полный текст сочинений:

Test 1

Almost any day of the week you can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing how to make our children good members of our society. There are several controversial points of view on this issue. The first regards schools as harmful in this respect due to some probability that it is difficult to find individual approaches to every child and prefers to turn to family as the best option to do this job. An alternative point is based on the advantages of schools as social institutions to teach this.

On the one hand, it is obvious that parents are the ones who are always close to their children. And they can find individual approaches to them and share their own experience. It does not matter whether you like it or not you have to recognize the fact that we are like our relatives and likely to follow their way in becoming good or bad members of our society as well. So their experience, whether successful or not, may be of the prime value for us.

However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that only schools are able to deliver all the information necessary to become true members of the society with long history. Ordinary people may lack knowledge and skills to teach anything even to their own children. Moreover, schools can be taken as models of the society which students are going to join in their adulthood. So these institutions may be considered the best for the job.

From my point of view it makes sense definitely. In any case, an attitude to this issue always depends on a particular person’s character and his or her personal circumstances or background. (287)

То же сочинение, но цветом выделены шаблонные фразы и подчёркнуты фразы, взятые из пояснения к заданию, из темы.

Test 1