The easy way to ielts writing academic Module

This sample essay achieves a high band score as it fully addresses
the questions, fulfills remarkable coherence (organization of
paragraphs), cohesion (linking ideas) throughout, and uses a wide
range of sentence structures, advanced topic-related vocabulary,
and collocations flexibly and appropriately to meet the
requirements for high band scores concerning vocabulary and
grammar. 
(Linking words and other cohesive devices are
underlined in this sample essay.)
In the following sample writing, I will describe how to create a three-body-
paragraph essay in which the first two paragraphs deal with advantage(s) and
disadvantage(s), while the third one focuses on the writer’s opinion. Bear in
mind that, although it is a possible way of structuring an essay, it might be
more time consuming than formatting a two-body-paragraph essay.

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Topic #9
Modern agricultural methods have replaced traditional ways of farming in
most countries.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this modernity and give your
own opinion.
Advantages of modern agriculture
1. Feeding the ever-growing human population
2. Increasing the variety of crops all year round everywhere
Disadvantages of modern agriculture
1. Substantial environmental pollution
2. Producing unhealthy foods
Explanatory sample writing
Introduction
Step 1: Paraphrase the topic
(Keep in mind that this is to avoid repetition.)
Today’s methods of farming have taken over conventional cultivation
techniques in many areas.
Step 2: Thesis statement
(Outline both advantages and disadvantages and
give your opinion implying the essay’s content.)
Although these modern farming techniques have substantial negative