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In particular, weekend jobs take up most of the students’ free time,
which is their best opportunity to unwind, take up hobbies, and revise
lessons to prepare for exams.
Second body paragraph
Step 1: Topic sentence
(Introduce the main advantage in a simple sentence;
note that as this paragraph aligns with the writer’s view, it should carry more
weight.)
However, acquiring practical knowledge is the principal benefit of this
situation for working high schoolers.
Step 2: Explanation 
(Explain the first advantage in 1-2 sentences.)
To put it simply, high school is the most crucial stage of education, where
students need to set future goals; nevertheless, high school curricula
provide teenagers with only some basic and theoretical knowledge, which
proves to be insufficient in tackling the hardships of real-work situations
later in life. Therefore, working a part-time job allows youth to improve
some practical skills.
Step 3: Example
(Provide an example to clarify the main point if possible.)
For instance, students who get weekend jobs at restaurants or retail
shops improve their customer service skills, which are essential, but not

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taught at school.
Step 4:
Add another advantage and explain it
(This works as the second
main idea of the paragraph.)
Another advantage of this is that most working students are likely to
realize whether to further their education or get a job after graduating
from high school with ease. Thus, they feel less bewildered, which often
happens to non-working students at this phase of life owing to lack of
experience.
Step 5: Ending sentence
(Paraphrase the topic sentence for a strong finish as
this paragraph holds the stronger side.)