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In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages of space
exploration are discussed; however, the writer has vividly given
more importance to its merits in responding to the second question.
Great use of advanced topic-related vocabulary, collocations,
advanced expressions, and cohesive devices in various sentence
structures, along with sufficient paragraphing, will qualify this
writing for a high band score. 
(Topic-related vocabulary,
collocations, and expressions are underlined in this sample essay.)
Type 3:
This type of question is quite similar to discussion essays, where
both views should be discussed, and the writer’s opinion must be given.
However, instead of the two views in discussion essays, candidates should
outline the advantages and disadvantages and give their opinion here. There
is a leeway to structure two to three body paragraphs, where the first two
body paragraphs focus on merits and demerits, and the third one focuses on
the writer’s opinion. If the writer’s view is clearly stated and extended in the
introduction and the conclusion, there is no need to develop the third body
paragraph. In the following sample writing, the organization of a two-body
paragraph essay, where the writer’s view is put in the introduction and the

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conclusion, is described. Again, it is better to organize the first body
paragraph based on the weaker side of the situation as the second paragraph
will then be focused on the stronger side, followed by the conclusion holding
writer’s opinion to give it a solid final impression.
Topic #8
In some countries, high schoolers are encouraged to work part-time while
studying.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own
opinion.