Практикум по синхронному переводу с русского языка на английский

в горячих ситуациях — the best thing here is to get away from "hot"
images, though "hot spot" will do in a pinch, to "tough spots" or "tight
situations."

10) скажем, привлечь сто миллиардов — this sentence fragment can be
rendered by a similar fragment in English: "Such as getting/like (very
colloquial) obtaining/a hundred billion."
11) вообще, мне представляется — вообще does not need to be
translated by "in general" or something of the sort. "Well, I think that,"
or "As I see it" are fine.

12. 
    любой хочет сказать о своей силе и мощи — "everyone" rather than
    "anyone" is needed here, and "toot his own horn" is short and suitably
    colloquial in suggesting self-praise.
    

12. 
    "Достань Луну" — the English equivalent of this phrase is "Reach
    for" or "shoot for the moon" rather than "get" or other verbs with a
    similar meaning.
    

14. 
    степень реализации карточки — "degree" does not work in English.
    The idea is that the number of sales has increased.
    

14. 
    и здесь решающим фактором могла стать реклама — "turning point"
    or "key factor" are much more in keeping with the tone of the whole text
    than the more formal "decisive factor." "Could" covers both the past
    tense and potential sales in the future.
    

14.