Ielts sample essays collection

(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses only a limited range of structures. 
Attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple 
sentences. 
May make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation may be faulty; errors can 
cause some difficulty for the reader. 
 
Example 3 

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
During the past years, a rise in crime rates has been observed. This essay will, firstly, 
discuss the main causes of crime and secondly, suggest viable solutions towards the 
prevention of an increase in criminal activity.
Crimes may fall in several different categorie
s
, from small acts such as stealing 
sweets, to much more serious crimes, for instance murdering someone. Despite there 
being a wide range of crimes, their causes may be similar. Firstly, a crime may be 
committed for revenge. If, for example, someone got fired then their frustration and 
anger may lead them to
seek
revenge 
on 
that person and therefore commit a crime. 
Secondly, another possible cause of crime may be due to the high and constant 
stress levels of individuals nowadays. The combination of social media and work 
results in high amounts of pressure on people. Consequently, this stress is relie
ved
through violent acts.
Several different solutions exist to prevent
a
further increase in crime rate. A possible 
solution to this issue would be for schools to focus more time on educating children 
and teaching them what to 
do 
when feeling such strong emotions such as frustration 
or even willingness for revenge. Additionally, governments should also offer low cost 
sport classes, for individuals who are suffering from stressful situations to go there, 
rather than commiting a crime.
In conclusion, despite there existing multiple different causes to why people commit a 
crime, the main two would be due to a will for revenge and because of high stress 
levels. Furthermore, possible ways to prevent crimes in the future would be through 
education and sports.