Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
may be faulty or mechanical. 
May not always use referencing clearly or appropriately. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task. 
Attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy. 
Makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede 
communication. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. 
Makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce 
communication. 
 
Example 3
The line graph illustrates the number of people who used public transportation by an 
Underground Station in London from 6 a
.
m
.
to 10 p
.
m. 
Overall, the number of people who choose to use Underground Station fluctuates 
during the day. In addition to that, during the rush hours
,
which are around at 8.00 
and 18.00 in London Underground Station
,
there are
the highest number of 
passengers, while just before this period the passenger numbers were the lowest. 
The Underground 
S
tation opens at 6 a
.
m
.
with the lowest number at 100 people, 
then two hours later it reaches a peak of 400 passengers which is double that of the 
number at 10 am. After that, the figure increases moderately to 300 passengers at 2 
pm, before dropping to a low of 100 people at 4 pm. 
With regards to evening sessions, the passenger number experiences a sharp 
increase to just below 400 at around 6 pm which is the second peak hour, before