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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
falling dramatically to approximately 150 people at the closing time of the 
Underground Station. 
(176 words)
Score: 7.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Covers the requirements of the task. Presents a clear overview of main trends, 
differences or stages. 
Clearly presents and highlights key features/bullet points but could be more fully 
extended.
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout. 
Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-
use. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. 
Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. 
Makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce 
communication. 
 
 

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
---------- Question 4 ---------- 
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 
Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. 
(High acid levels are measured by low pH values) 
Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health. 
You should write at least