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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
Makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce 
communication. 
Example 3
It is often taught that the economic help from developed states does not solve the 
problems of poverty in underdeveloped countries. For that reason, some people 
suggest that it is better to give different kind
s
of help to the poor countries rather 
than financial aid. I wholeheartedly agree with this idea because the financial help 
from more developed countries does not reach the people of underdeveloped 
countries.
Many developing and underdeveloped countries are suffering from economic crises 
all around the world. Although some developed countries are proving a cash flow to 
the countries in need, this approach does not take off the burden on many poorer 
countries because this financial aid does not reach to the people of underdeveloped 
countries. The most essential reason for this issue is the corruption of politicians 
who
use the aid from the developed countries for their own needs rather than using 
it 
for 
the sake of their citizens. Hence, the direct financial help is not solving the poverty of 
the citizens in many underdeveloped states. 
Developed countries should support directly the basic demands of the people in 
poorer countries. Firstly, they can solve the most fundamental problems in 
underdeveloped countries via building factories that provide consumable water or 
produce renewable energy. 
In
this way, the employment rate will also increase for the 
people in poorer countries. Secondly, developed countries can also build schools and 
hospitals to enhance the quality of life in poorer countries. Hence, the direct aid to the 
people from the developed countries will have plenty of advantage
s
for the citizens of 
poorer states. 
In conclusion, many rich countries are helping other countries 
with
financial aid. 
Because of the corrupted politicians in poorer countries, this financial help does not 
solve the problems of underdeveloped countries. The educational and essential needs 
should be addressed directly by developed countries to tackle the problems of 
poverty in underdeveloped countries.

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