Ielts sample essays collection

250
words. 
Example 1
As a normal way of thinking, we assume that if we have 
wealth
we must share it 
with the poor. We believe that this philosophy applies to individuals and nations as 
well. This could be one of the reasons 
why it
is easy to see fundraising campaigns in 
developed countries trying to improve the life of people living in less fortunate 
nations. 
However, the economic, 
political
and cultural reality is much 
more 
bitter and complex 
than
our moral values. Personally, I strongly agree that developed countries should 
give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid, and there are 
different reasons for this argument. 
Firstly, corruption is one of the worst issues in poor countries. It is not feasible for 
developed nations to provide financial aid to corrupt governments because 
in
the end 
the money will be for the politicians interests and not for the wellbeing of the citizens. 
So
,
one good strategy could be the constant education of the people, so they can be 
aware about the term corruption and how powerful the citizens can be if they decide 
to fight back against bad governments. 
Secondly, developed nations can try to create more education opportunities for 
brilliant students in those poor countries. Universities and colleges in countries like 
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England and Australia could easily provide a good education for those students who 
want to create a better future
,
not just for themselves, but for their 
countries
as well. 
Finally, wealthy nations can find paths to create job opportunities in poor countries. 
With this strategy, people will learn that they need to work honestly to gain money, 
and therefore have a better quality of life. Nonetheless, this aim could 
appear
hard to 
achieve because 
of 
the corrupt governments that I mentioned before
;
however
,
developed nations can find assistance from international organizations such as 
the 
United Nations, in order to create more jobs in those countries. 
To conclude, wealthy nations are not forced to help poor countries, but it is our moral 
value as human beings to try to help others living
in
difficult circumstances. For this 
reason, developed countries should invest in education and work seeking to improve 
the life on poor nations, and have a better world for everybody
.