Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. 
Makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce 
communication. 
Example 2
Some say that the environment can be improved only by governments and large 
enterprises and that individuals are useless for this purpose. I agree that 
the 
government and large enterprises play a key role to make the environment better 
than it is now. 
Large companies have financially strong power to invest their money to 
help 
make 
the environment cleaner. To reduce the emission of pollutants
,
which are generated 
during manufacturing various products, a large amount of investment is required to 
install equipment to remove 
these 
pollutants. Further, environmentally friendly raw 
products, such as trees, generally cost more than raw materials which are cheaper 
that trees but generally produce more pollutants than trees do. Therefore, large 
companies can improve the environment by investing 
more of 
their money to reduce 
the emission of pollutants. 
Governments can contribute to the improvement of the environment by changing 
laws so that people can live in society in a cleaner 
and more environmentally friendly 
way. For example, 
the 
government can direct people by law to the use of public 
transportation rather than their own personal car. By doing so, the emission of 
noxious gas
es
from cars can be reduced, and then the quality of 
the 
atmosphere can 
get better. Governments also are able to ban 
dumping
sewage from factories to 
rivers or the ocean by law. Such legislative measure
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to make the quality of air and 
water cleaner can be implemented only by governments, not by individual. 
In conclusion, I believe that governments and large companies can improve the 
environment by using the ways which are impossible for individuals to implement by 
anyhow.