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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
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Firstly, we must put a halt on the cutting down of trees. We have witnessed the 
effects of trees being cut down over the years and it is crucial that we make an effort 
to conserve the remaining green space we have on earth so the situation does not 
worsen. Secondly, we could look at alternative methods to provide clean and 
sustainable energy so we can reduce the reliance on trees for fuel. Examples of such 
renewable energy sources are solar power farms and wind farms. If we could gather 
enough energy from various sources such that we could eradicate our need to burn 
trees for fuel, we would have made a huge progress in dealing with global warming. 
Last but not least
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if we could address the issue of consumerism, it would reduce a 
tremendous amount of waste on a global scale. I understand that it would be a 
challenging process and require the support of government forces, but it is not 
impossible. If we could reduce the demand for goods, the number of factories being 
built is less likely to increase. 
In conclusion, I would like to highlight that the growing evidence linking global 
warming to man-made activities should not be overlooked and instead should be 
dealt with seriously. Our living environment is very important to us as our livelihood 
depends on it. We ought to make every effort to conserve our limited resources and 
do our best to minimise the harmful impact on our planet that is making global 
temperatures higher. 
(528 words) 
Score: 7.0 
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(TA) Task Achievement
The candidate addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear position 
throughout.