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Zafarjon Sobitov
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Body Paragraph 1 – inshoning birinchi qismi 
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Topic sentence 
– o’zbek tilida mavzuga oid jumla xisoblanib, insho qismlarining birinchi 
bo’lib yoziladigan gapi xisoblanadi. Boshqacha so’z bilan aytganda topic sentence sizning shu 
bo’limni o’zida insho gaplari nima haqida davom etishi haqida ma’lumot beradi. Topic sentence 
na’munada qanday bo’lishi kerakligini ko’ramiz
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Example: Higher excise on liqueur and cigarettes has proven to be successful at 
curbing the harm caused by these substances. 
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Explanation – 
ushbu bo’limda endi topic sentence da boshlangan fikrni chuqurroq tushinitirib 
o’tishingiz kerak bo’ladi. Buning yaxshi usuli bu imtihon oluvchi bu mavzu haqida ma'lumotga 
ega emas deb taxmin qilish va siz nimani nazarda tutayotganingizni aniq tushuntirishingiz 
kerak. Bu quyidagicha ko'rinishi mumkin:
 
Example: This revenue has been used to treat health problems associated with these 
products and has proven useful in advertising campaigns warning people about the 
dangers of alcohol and tobacco abuse. Tax from fast food could be used in the same 
way. 
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Example – 
fikrimizni tasdiqlash uchun bir misol haqida o'ylashimiz kerak. So'nggi yangiliklar, 
tadqiqotlar yoki reklama haqida o'ylab ko'ring. Agar siz bitta narsa haqida o'ylay olmasangiz, 
uni tuzing. Tekshiruvchi haqiqiy yoki yo'qligini tekshirmaydi.
 
Example: The United Kingdom is a prime example, where money from smokers is 
used to treat lung cancer and heart disease, while at the same time, pumped into health 
campaigns in schools to warn children about the dangers of smoking.
 
Endi bizni body paragraph 1 ya’ni inshoning birinchi qismi to’liq tayyor bo’ldi. Na’munada 
ko’rishimiz mumkin:
Higher excise on liqueur and cigarettes has proven to be successful at curbing the 
harm caused by these substances. This revenue has been used to treat health problems 
associated with these products and has proven useful in advertising campaigns 
warning people about the dangers of alcohol and tobacco abuse. Tax from fast food 
could be used in the same way. The United Kingdom is a prime example, where money 
from smokers is used to treat lung cancer and heart disease.

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