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4) Body paragraph 2
Based on the line graph, working out accounted for a higher percentage
compared with watching TV. Just above 4% and 6% of the population
preferred watching TV and working out respectively in 2000. Both
trends dropped drastically in 2010; however, they recovered quickly.
Working out is predicted to reach a peak of around 10% by 2030. In
contrast, watching TV is likely to grow slowly to reach the same level as
in 2000.
(The trends in the line graph are precisely compared using various
comparative structures. Details and specific vocabulary and phrases are
accurately practiced. There is a smooth transition into neutral future tenses

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(…is predicted to/…is likely to). Some details for 2010 are skipped, which is
quite acceptable as providing fully detailed descriptions is not highly advised
concerning time management.)
Sample writing
The bar chart provides information about hours of free time that two age
groups spent in England from 2000 to 2015, while the line graph compares
different types of leisure activities over the same period with a projection of
the year 2030.
Overall, the amount of free time had a reduction for both age groups
regardless of some fluctuations. On the other hand, different types of
activities are likely to experience a rise by 2030.
According to the bar chart, the amount of free time fluctuated wildly for both
categories.10-15-year-olds spent over 4 hours on daily leisure activities in
2000, while this figure noticeably declined to almost 2.5 hours for 15-25-
year-olds. In contrast, the older age group was entitled to the highest amount
of free time with 4.5 hours a day in 2010 in contrast to nearly half that of the
younger age group, who experienced another increase to 3.5 hours of free
time in 2015. On the other hand, the figure hit the trough at under 2 hours
simultaneously for the older age group.
Based on the line graph, working out accounted for a higher percentage
compared with watching TV. Just above 4% and 6% of the population
preferred watching TV and working out respectively in 2000. Both trends
dropped drastically in 2010; however, they recovered quickly. Working out is
predicted to reach a peak of around 10% by 2030. In contrast, watching TV is
likely to grow slowly to reach the same level as in 2000.
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