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4) Body paragraph 2
According to the pie chart, Canada had the highest number of travelers,
with 5.7% in 2010. In comparison, England was the second most popular
destination, with 4.2% of tourists. In contrast, China and Japan were the
least visited. The number of visits had a sharp decline to 1.6% for China.
Similarly, it dropped noticeably for Japan, which received only 0.9% of
the tourists’ overall number.
(The paragraph focuses on the pie chart using practical comparative and
superlative structures. As the pie chart is not fully detailed, I decided not to
skip any given data, but that is not mandatory if the task is fully detailed.
There is an excellent focus on specific vocabulary and phrases to describe
trends.)
Sample writing
The line graph compares the number of tourists traveling overseas from 2000
to 2015, and the pie chart shows the percentage of traveling to 4 different
countries in the year 2010.
Overall, there was a slight increase in the number of men and women who
traveled over the period. By far, Canada and England were the most popular
countries to visit in 2010.
Based on the line graph, the number of men traveling abroad accounted for
over 4 million, almost double that of women in 2000. However, these trends
had opposite directions in the next five years. Female travelers’ figure had a

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sharp rise to a peak of just above 4 million while it plunged to half that of
male tourists. In the following decade, men’s trend gradually went up and
recovered, unlike women’s trend, which had a significant fall before rising to
just under 3 million in 2015.
According to the pie chart, Canada had the highest number of travelers, with
5.7% in 2010. In comparison, England was the second most popular
destination, with 4.2% of tourists. In contrast, China and Japan were the least
visited. The number of visits had a sharp decline to 1.6% for China.
Similarly, it dropped noticeably for Japan, which received only 0.9% of the
tourists’ overall number.
(214 words)