This sample writing is entitled to a high band score as it has
excellent
coherence
(fluency,
organization
of
data,
and
paragraphing) and cohesion (logical development of the
paragraphs and seamless use of linking devices). Specific
vocabulary and phrases are highlighted in various comparative
sentence structures flexibly and accurately.
(Comparative language
and structures are underlined in this sample writing.)
Combination #2
The bar chart shows the amount of leisure time different age groups in
England had, and the line graph shows several types of pastime activities
with a projection for the future.
Summarize the information by reporting the main features and making
comparisons where relevant.
Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
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