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4) Body paragraph 2
In this paragraph, we can express contrast or make a comparison between the
trends. As these trends continue their directions the same way for the rest of
the period, we need to focus on the comparison. Signaling the comparison or
contrast at the beginning of the second body paragraph helps with better
cohesion.
To draw a comparison, the figure for traveling by car had a steady rise
to reach the highest point with 80% in 2015. In contrast, the percentage
of people who took a bus noticeably dropped to nearly 30% at the end of
the given period.
(In both body paragraphs, there is a logical organization of the data. Using
different comparative structures, details, such as dates and percentages, and
academic vocabulary and phrases help with a clear description.)

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Note that there is no need to write about every single piece of data