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Explanatory sample writing
1) Introduction
The pie charts give information on the percentage of household expenses
for Canadians and Peruvians in 2000.
(“The pie charts” are introduced. Effective paraphrasing is applied: the word
“expenditure” is altered to “expenses”; the verb “compare” is changed to
“give information on”; “Canada” and “Peru” as countries are paraphrased to
“Canadians” and “Peruvians” as nationalities.)
2) Overview
Overall, both countries spent the largest amount of their annual budget
on housing. On the other hand, the lowest amount of money was
allocated to entertainment for both nations.
(The paragraph is started with the signal word, “overall.” There is a general
comparison between the largest and the smallest units.)
3) Body paragraph 1
Regarding the given data, both Canada and Peru spent the most
significant amount of their annual income on housing with 8.2% and