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Wednesday, August 23, 2017 
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'permissive parenting' question 
Let's continue with the question below, which we started looking at a couple of weeks ago. 
Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever 
they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of 
parenting have for children as they get older?

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Here's my "essay skeleton". I'll finish the main paragraphs next week. 
Introduction
It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In my opinion, this is 
not a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative long-term consequences. 
Topic sentence, main paragraph 1
If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a certain amount of 
discipline is necessary. 
Topic sentence, main paragraph 2
In my view, the children of indulgent or lenient parents are likely to grow up with several negative 
personality traits. 
Conclusion
In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self control and respect for others, and I 
do not believe that the permissive parenting style supports this objective. 
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Wednesday, August 30, 2017 
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'permissive parenting' answer 
Here's my full answer to the question below.