Практикум по синхронному переводу с русского языка на английский

здесь есть реальные возможности — the interpreter should not forget
that "potential" is often a good or better translation of "возможности"
than the frequently used "opportunities" or "possibilities."

6. 
   важные смысловые моменты — "момент" is sometimes а ложный
   друг переводчика. The notion is of various ideas or concepts; "момен­
   ты" can safely be dropped.
   

6. 
   поощряет обновление — the idea of обновление is of a revitalization
   or revival, and this sounds better than the awkward-sounding literal
   translation "renewal," which sounds strange as applied to ideas
   or concepts.
   

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9. 
   среди сторонников и критиков — supporters/advocates and
   "opponents" sounds somewhat better than "critics," though the word can
   also be used.
   

9. 
   какие нуждаются в коррективе — "corrections" should be avoided,
   as this word is best applied to something highly specific — i.e. typing or
   mathematical errors. In talking about ideas or abstractions, "adjustments"
   or "modifications" are much better choices.
   

9. 
   в новых координатах — "coordinates" does not work in English.
   "Elements," "factors," or "points of reference" will do.
   

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