Практикум по синхронному переводу с русского языка на английский

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1) в последнее время — this is best rendered as "recently," not literally,
"in recent times."
2) выходит реклама — The idea here is that advertising is being
aggressively used, i.e. "in the forefront," "in center stage," or simply "is
being promoted."
3) продвигает — advertising is "putting across" or "sending the message"
of the bank's products, not just "advancing" them.

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   а помните — this is both colloquial and emphatic, requiring an
   additional word in English: "Just remember." Antonymic translation
   would work, too: "Don't forget..."
   

4. 
   дубовый стол — what is important here is the image, not the literal
   wording. "A heavy desk/huge wooden desk" will say more to an English
   speaker than "an oak desk."
   

6. 
   более придирчивыми — this requires some rewording, as the
   dictionary definitions "captious" or "nagging" are totally inappropriate to
   the colloquial tone used here. "Becoming/getting very picky/fussy/choosy"
   would do it.
   

6. 
   это тоже рекламный ход — ход here is a "tool" or "trick," or,
   colloquially, "thing." "Move" will not work here.
   

6. 
   здесь неуместны передержки — this phrase requires some reworking,
   as "inappropriate" or "improper" sound too stiff. "You can't overdo that"
   or ''You've got to go easy on that" will do.
   

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