Практикум по синхронному переводу с русского языка на английский

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   когда начала проявляться — "when there first appeared" will do it,
   but you could also say "when there was the beginning of." Or the
   interpreter can wait and say "when a continuing/sustained trend began..."
   

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   проблема с финансами еще больше обостряется в условиях... —
   there are a number of options here. The simplest is to say that "the
   problem is being aggravated or exacerbated" or "has worsened" because of
   the growing financial crisis. В условиях can be omitted, or replaced by
   "because."
   

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   в сложившейся ситуации — here is another example of this word
   which is best rendered as "this," "that" or "the existing situation," not by
   a form of the verb.
   

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   в связи с обострением там кризиса с учетом того... — "given the
   aggravation of the crisis there and because its consequences..." is a simple
   solution. В связи here is causal, and does not need to be rendered as "in
   connection with;" с учетом того also has a causal meaning, and does not
   need to be translated as "in the light of or "taking into account that,"
   which does nothing but complicate the sentence.
   
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   5) в резолюции по финансовому кризису — if резолюция is not made
   into a nominative subject, the sentence will be extremely clumsy once the
   interpreter gets to "перед ООН поставлена."
   

6) предотвращения и своевременного реагирования — there is a
problem here because two different prepositions are needed in English: