Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

him

 and I will change 

his

 water.”)

 

Assessment Commentary:

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AF6: 

Conventions

 – Write with technical accuracy of syntax and punctuation in phrases,  

clauses and sentences

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The author uses full stops appropriately and also accurately uses question marks. 

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The author uses a capital letter for “I,” but does not use capitals when starting sentences unless the sentence 

begins with “I.” 

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There is evidence that the author is experimenting with the use of commas in the context of letter writing (e.g., 

in salutation and closing).

AF7: 

Word Choice

 – Select appropriate and effective vocabulary

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The author uses one convincing word within the text (e.g., “need”). 

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There is some evidence that the author is expanding his/her vocabulary (e.g., “fantastic,” “company”).