Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF8: 

Conventions

 – Use correct spelling

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Spelling is accurate throughout the text, with few exceptions.

AF9: 

Presentation 

- Handwriting and presentation

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Other presentational features of the text type were not required for this writing task; however, including a timeline 

and/or subtitles will make the text more advanced.

Where to Next? Identifying Targets for this Student: 

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AF 5 - Incorporating a wider variety of sentence structures and lengths will help this student progress through 

Level 5. The writer needs to craft longer, more complex sentences whilst making deliberate attempts to change 

sentence length, structure, and type and sentence word order to increase the variety within the text. 

•  AF 3 – The author can be encouraged to revise the closing to include a deep reflection of the individual and 

 

connection to the opening.    

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