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IELTS
 JOURNAL 
 
 
22 
Adding an explanation 
In adding explanation, it is important to minimize the number of words which you intend to 
use to make sure you stay within the word limit. Look at the examples below. 
1. 
Both cities experienced a rise in the number of tourists coming in through their 
airports, which reached a common level of 255,000 in July. 
Reduced Form: 
Both cities experienced a rise in the number of tourists coming in 
through their airports, reaching a common level of 255,000 in July. 
2. 
Gold bar prices experienced a spectacular rise in November, which climbed to a new 
peak of $625. 
Reduced Form: 
Gold bar prices experienced a spectacular rise in November, 
climbing to a new peak of $625. 
3. 
In the first half of 2009, the attendance at the museum went into free fall, which