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participate in the local New Year celebrations and fireworks in some major cities
which make them feel that they belong to their new countries.
In conclusion, although everyone has their own culture, it seems me that people
should integrate fully into society in the host countries.
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SAMPLE 22
Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines
intended for human use. Others, however, think it is cruel to do that.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
The practice of examining medicines before use plays an important role in
ensuring users' safety. However, there are opposite views about whether
experimentation on animals for medical purposes are inhuman or not. While I am
in favor of the view that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support
it for the development of medicines.
On the one hand, testing animals for the usability of medicines is unethical as it
causes physical pains for innocent animals. We could not understand the
tremendous pain and scare feeling animals have to suffer from because few people
know that animals are not given anesthetics when tests are conducted. Moreover,
how people have behaved towards animals is gradually making humans become
increasingly insensitive. For example, when people are really too familiar with
news regarding experiments on animals, they would consider such activities to be
normal. Hence, men's sympathy for animals is rapidly fading.
On the other hand, supporters of the use of animals in medical research have their
own justifications. Experiments on animals have greatly contributed to saving
people from fatal diseases such as Ebola fever or malaria because they will assist
medical researchers to find out different types of medicines or remedies for such
diseases and assure the safety of those medicines for consumers. Therefore, those
who are against testing animals might think differently when their beloved persons
need a treatment that has been developed through the use of animal
experimentation.
In conclusion, although I disagree with animal testing because this action is cruel,
it would be more brutal if the annual numbers of deaths rose strongly due to the
lack of drugs which need to be examined on animals' bodies. Therefore, until
equally effective alternatives are developed, I think this practice is still
comprehensible.