Ielts sample essays collection

IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
during this time period. Both the in person and telephone enquiry methods shared a 
similar feat in enquiry numbers, with the greatest enquiry rise between the months of 
April and June as indicated by the sharp slopes on the respective line graphs. 
Comparatively, the enquiry method of letter and email experienced a gradual 
decrease in number for the reported months of January to May. However, during the 
months of March to April and May to June respectively, both the telephone and letter 
and email enquiry methods maintained a steady enquiry number indicted by the 
plateau on their respective line graphs. The Tourist Information Centre received the 
most number of enquiries in the month of June.
(196 words)
Score: 7.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Generally addresses the topic. Details are mainly mechanical and there isn’t a clear 
overview. Key features are adequately covered but could be done more fully to 
achieve a higher band. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings.
Skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in 
word choice and collocation. Produces rare errors in spelling and word formation. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a wide range of structures. The majority of sentences are error-free. Makes 
only very occasional errors or inappropriacies. 

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