Ielts sample essays collection

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. 
Produces frequent error free sentences. 
Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors. 
 
Example 4 
Global temperature has increase
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consistently over the years and it is evident that 
man-made activities are one of the main reasons. In order to solve this issue, there 
are a few measures needed to be taken by the government and the people. In this 
essay, I will analyse the causes and provide solutions. 
Firstly of all, trees and forests have been burned to make lands for houses and 
commercial buildings. This inevitably causes a rise in the temperature and pollution 
on earth. The best solution to this problem is to make full use of the land we have. 
Governments should encourage construction companies to build more apartments 
than houses. The reason behind this is that apartments can accommodate more 
people and it takes up less land. Also, governments should implement laws to limit 
the number of buildings used for commercial purposes, such as the supermarkets and 
fast food chains. If we can control the limits of these buildings, we will be able to save 
forests from being destroyed. 
In addition, factories and cars are also the reasons for the cause of air pollution and 
the increase in temperatures around the world. Governments can look into upgrading 
their infrastructures and public transport system
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to make travelling more convenient 
and accessible. Hence, vehicles would not be necessary anymore. Otherwise, we can 
encourage people to purchase electric cars over normal cars. To a certain extent, it 
can help to reduce air pollution. Governments can create stringent guidelines and 
regulations to prevent factories and vehicles from over polluting the earth. 
Finally, over use of electricity by households and companies 
is
causing global 
temperatures to rise. We can educate the young people through organising 
campaigns and going to schools for educational talks. Company’s leaders can also