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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
encourage their employees to save electric
ity
by turning off lights, computers and air 
conditioners when not in use. 
To sum up, I think burning of trees, forests, pollution from cars and factories and over 
use of electricity are some of the main factors for the increased in global 
temperatures. In order to eliminate these problems, everyone has a part to play. 
Minimising the use of cars, be
ing
conscious of the use of electricity and 
enacting 
stricter laws are just some of the different ways to solve these problems.
(372 words) 
Score: 8.0 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Sufficiently addresses all parts of the task. The response is well developed with 
supported evidence and examples.
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately.
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings.
Skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in 
word choice and collocation. Produces rare errors in spelling and word formation 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a wide range of structures. The majority of sentences are error-free. Makes 
only very occasional errors or inappropriacies 

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IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION