Ielts sample essays collection

(279 words) 
Score: 7.5 
 
 
Deleted: 
aboutA the

---

- 120 - 
IELTS SAMPLE ESSAYS COLLECTION 
VOLUME 1 – Academic Training 
http://ieltsonlinetests.com
 
Detail comments 
(TA) Task Achievement
Sufficiently addresses all parts of the task. The response is well developed with 
supported evidence and examples. 
(CC) Coherence and Cohesion
Sequences information and ideas logically. Manages all aspects of cohesion well. 
Uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately. 
(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision. The 
candidate uses some less common lexical items with some awareness of style and 
collocation. There may be some occasional errors in word choice or spelling. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a variety of complex structures. Produces frequent error-free sentences. 
Candidate has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors.
Example 3
In a technology driven society many people believe that the history of a country has 
no relevance. However, historians feel that it is worth studying history since a 
comprehensive 
knowledge about the past prevents us from making a mistake twice. 
The recent European history has proved that cooperation between European 
countries is better than enforcing national interests at the expense of others. One 
lesson of the outbreak of the First World War is that conflicts between countries 
should not be decided through waging wars but on international collaboration. What 
we should learn from history is that single countries are unable to increase their