Ielts sample essays collection

(LR) Lexical Resource
 
Uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task. 
Attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy. 
Makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede 
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illnes
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lacko
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ecercises,
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to
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phisical
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thier

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communication. 
(GRA) Grammatical Range and Accuracy
 
Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms. 
Makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce 
communication. 
 
Example 2 
In the past, school programs were based on books and manual writing. Children were 
taught to write, read and research on paper, using books and notebooks. 
Consequently, jobs were based on those skills: good written communication abilities 
and confidence in researching using paper literature. Additionally, manual labor jobs 
were more popular and scholastic competences were not fundamental to find a 
suitable position. 
Nowadays
,
the 
world is based on computers, and technology is leading the modern 
world. 
Not only o
ffices, hospitals, 
and 
schools, but also restaurants and bars have 
become 
digitally
dependent. 
People are today requested to know how to use a mobile phone, write and send an 
email, 
and 
research on the Internet. Knowledge has 
become
very popular and each of 
us can consider his/her self very fortunate, having the possibility to use the Internet 
as 
a 
source of information. These days 
the 
world has been made extremely 
comfortable and easier 
with
technology. 
On the other hand, in order to survive in a technological environment, children need 
to be instructed on how to proceed. Nowadays
,
schools need to be based on modern 
curricula, and subjects have to be taught with computer assistance. 
Whether blackboards were the main communication method between teachers and 
students in the past, digital screens should replace them in a modern context.