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Comments
Task Achievement
The essay addresses all parts of the task as it explains the problems in
paragraph one and the solutions in paragraph two. The main ideas are well-
developed and supported. 
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay is also organised logically as it introduces the topic and sets out
the thesis in the introduction. Each body paragraph then has a central topic

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(problems in body one and solutions in body two), and the essay finishes
with a conclusion that summarises the main ideas presented.
A range of cohesive devices are also used well so the essay can be read with
ease and all the ideas, sentences and paragraphs are linked together well. 
Lexical Resource
There is a wide range of vocabulary used which is related to the topic and
the writer uses ###a href="https://www.ieltsbuddy.com/collocation.html"
data-reader-unique-id="125">collocations well.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The grammar is very accurate and there is a wide range of sentence
structures used. There are plenty of examples 
complex sentence
structures
 used correctly which are important for a good score. For example:
While this can create problems, there are steps that can be taken to
reduce the impacts. 
If they cannot secure work, this leads to other problems.
As older people are likely to have a family to support, they may not
have an…
This needs to begin with ensuring that older people have…

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Professionals Leaving to Work Abroad Essay
This an IELTS problems and solutions essay about the problem of
professionals leaving their own developing countries to go and work abroad
in more developed countries. 
This is the question: