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Comments
This rural to urban migration essay addresses the task well as the body
paragraphs give sufficient details to explain the reasons for moving and the
pros and cons of this. 
It means the essay stretches to 326 words - you should reduce the ideas in
the body paragraphs to perhaps two in each if you are a weaker writer and
you are unable to write an essay this long. The introduction could also be
made shorter to save time. 
Quality is more important than quantity, so there is no point writing as much
as possible if this will affect your coherence and cohesion, and perhaps your
grammatical accuracy. 
The rural to urban migration essay is organised clearly, with the reasons
discussed first but then possible drawbacks next. The conclusion then clearly
states the writers view on the topic. 

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Overpopulation Essay
This model essay is about overpopulation in cities. You specifically have
to talk about the problems of overpopulation, and suggest
some solutions to this problem.
Note that this question specifically asks you
what governments and individualscan do.
Here is the question:
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments
and individuals can tackle these problems.
Note that this question specifically asks you
what governments and individuals can do. You MUST, therefore, write
about what both of these can do in order to fully answer the question. Note
as well that you must talk about serious problems.
Organisation
The easiest way to organize a problems and solutions essay is as follows:
Body 1: Problems
Body 2: Solutions
In this essay, a separate paragraph has been written about government and
individual solutions, so it is organized as follows: