Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF4: 

Organisation 

– Construct paragraphs and use cohesion within and between paragraphs

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The author uses simple, generic linking words (e.g., next, then, last). 

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The author does not yet use return sweep as every individual sentence begins on a new line.

AF5: 

Sentence Fluency

 – Vary sentences for clarity, purpose, and effect

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The author writes his/her thoughts in short yet full sentences.

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The author uses the simple past tense appropriately throughout the text; however, it’s noted that he/she heavily  

relies on “went.” 

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There is no evidence of connectives used within the text.