Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

Level 1b

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author attempts to provide three ideas, but they are loosely related to the topic of going to the pool (e.g., 

the author does not tell about the events that occurred). There is no evidence of elaboration in any of the  

ideas. The details answer the “who” and “where” questions, but not the “when.” 

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There are no pictures to help the author express his/her unique voice and individuality.  

       AF2: 

Organisation

 – Produce texts which are appropriate to task, reader, and purpose

•  The piece of writing does not seem to be directed towards a specific audience and the author’s voice is similar 

 

to what one would expect if the author was writing within another text type. 

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The author does not include a title.