Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

AF7- W

ord Choice

AF8 - Conventions

AF9 - Presentation

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Student Samples

Level 1

Students working within Level 1 are expected to meet criteria, usually with support.

Level 1c

Assessment Commentary:

AF1: 

Ideas & Voice

 – Write imaginative, interesting, and thoughtful texts

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The author provides three ideas (e.g., put on suit, went in the water, went home) that are generally related to 

the small moment. There is no evidence of elaboration for any of the ideas. The details answer the “who” and 

“where” questions, but not the “when.” 

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The author attempts to show his/her unique voice through pictures; however, more details and/or labels are  

needed to demonstrate the writer’s individuality.