Cayman Islands Writing Exemplar

       AF2: 

Organisation

 – Produce texts which are appropriate to task, reader, and purpose

•  The author attempts to connect with the reader; however, it is unclear if this text is directed towards a specific 

 

audience. The author’s tone is becoming lively and energetic, showcasing the excitement of the real event. 

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The author’s title is predictable and directly states the event (e.g. “New York Trip”). It has yet to catch the  

reader’s attention. 

AF3: 

Organisation

 – Organise and present whole texts effectively, sequencing and structuring

information, ideas, and events

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The author attempts to include a simple hooking strategy (e.g., asking a question), followed by two sentences of 

detail, providing the reader with a context of the recount. 

• 

The details of the text are ordered in logical sequence, but large gaps in time exist which makes the text choppy. 

• 

The author includes a short sentence that expresses his/her personal feeling about the event (e.g., “I  love my  

mommy for taking me to New York”).

Student Samples

Level 2

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